Bedroom with balcony.

Bedroom with balcony.

Postby Mike Amos » Sat Oct 16, 2021 9:55 pm

Just playing with this.
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Postby Rich O Brien » Sat Oct 16, 2021 10:07 pm

Really good. I'd increase or add fresnel on the duvet to sell the fabric more. The white pillow is the only element that stands out.

Really impressive output though. I'd be chuffed with a result like that :thumb:
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Postby tuna1957 » Sat Oct 16, 2021 10:15 pm

Excellent. ! Total agreement with the comments Rich made. :thumb:
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Re: Bedroom with balcony.

Postby Mike Amos » Sat Oct 16, 2021 10:40 pm

Thanks folks. :)
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Re: Bedroom with balcony.

Postby Bryan K » Sun Oct 17, 2021 2:20 am

That's a photo, right? :thumb:
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Postby Mike Amos » Sun Oct 17, 2021 12:04 pm

Thanks mate, I think the photo is the bottom one..........
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Re: Bedroom with balcony.

Postby Mike Amos » Mon Oct 18, 2021 4:36 pm

Some alteration to the duvet cover to improve or not, the result.
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Re: Bedroom with balcony.

Postby Rich O Brien » Mon Oct 18, 2021 5:23 pm

Looks more fabric-y now. Good job.

I'd lose the foreground side table. It serves no purpose other than reflection. Maybe an open book or half finished coffee would tell more of a story. On its own it reminds me of the monolith in 2001.

Yummy result though!
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Postby Bryan K » Tue Oct 19, 2021 3:40 am

Wow. I did not even notice until you made the change.

Looks great. :thumb:
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Re: Bedroom with balcony.

Postby Mike Amos » Tue Oct 19, 2021 11:38 am

Thanks folks, Rich, I knew about that piece of furniture but got caught up thinking about the texture. A kind of blindness that occurs when I am too focused on one thing. I will try to fix that. Thanks for the suggestions, appreciated. :thumb:
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Last post for this one.

Postby Mike Amos » Tue Oct 19, 2021 9:08 pm

I think this is reasonable. I decided the ceiling lights were distracting so reduced the number and added colour to the chest. I thought about adding the headphones to the bear but did not get around to it.

Edited because I did not even finish the write up, doh.
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Re: Bedroom with balcony.

Postby Bryan K » Tue Oct 19, 2021 11:43 pm

Cheeky monkey? :lol:

Oh and you colored the chest and changed the ceiling lights. Nice!
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Postby Mike Amos » Wed Oct 20, 2021 10:57 am

Thanks Bryan, I was concerned initially about changing the chest to multi coloured rather than a single wood texture. Still not 100% on it but it is what it is.

Thanks for the feed back, it's a great tool to have. :thumb:
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Postby tuna1957 » Wed Oct 20, 2021 4:16 pm

:thumb:
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