Simple Bedroom

Simple Bedroom

Postby Mike Amos » Sun Jun 13, 2021 9:06 pm

Not really doing very much in the current temperatures, I just left this to render for a while to see what would come out.
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby tuna1957 » Mon Jun 14, 2021 4:58 am

Great job ! :thumb: :thumb:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Mike Amos » Mon Jun 14, 2021 12:08 pm

Thanks, it's missing something, I know not what.
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Bryan K » Mon Jun 14, 2021 12:09 pm

Nice! That come out really good! :thumb:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Mike Amos » Mon Jun 14, 2021 4:58 pm

Thanks, mate.
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Bryan K » Tue Jun 15, 2021 4:26 am

Mike Amos wrote:Thanks, mate.

Small suggestion? The curtain? Duplicate it and put the copy between the windows to cover that blank section of wall.
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Postby Mike Amos » Tue Jun 15, 2021 10:36 am

Thanks mate, I'll give that a go. :thumb:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby loco » Tue Jun 15, 2021 4:56 pm

Great start. Maybe change the camera angle to eye level. You have a ceiling light I think, maybe include this in the image. Also maybe increase the exposure a little.
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Postby Mike Amos » Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:11 pm

Thanks mate, I'll give that a whirl. I must admit I was wondering about the camera height but a bit tunnel visioned on having some slippers near the bed too. :enlight:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby nlipovac » Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:39 pm

You nailed it! :fro: :thumb:
My two cents would be to move the light so that it fills more interior and if you graze curtains so some light passes through them it would be great.
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Bryan K » Tue Jun 15, 2021 10:40 pm

Nice! That really helps fill the blank space. The whole scene looks a lot fuller. :thumb:

The slippers and robe are a great touch as well. The headboard looks brighter as well.

Top notch! I would swear that's a photo.
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Mike Amos » Tue Jun 15, 2021 11:59 pm

Ta mate, the height suggestion made me think and I think the validity of the suggestion is made. One light adjusted in Irfanview the other natural render level.
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Bryan K » Wed Jun 16, 2021 12:19 am

Perfect. Wow! :thumb:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Mike Amos » Wed Jun 16, 2021 12:28 am

Thanks Bryan, appreciated mate. :thumb:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby tuna1957 » Thu Jun 17, 2021 4:04 am

Great progression of your model :thumb: :thumb:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Mike Amos » Thu Jun 17, 2021 10:41 am

Cheers mate, I have had a few comments on the bathrobe which does look a bit like there was way too much starch in the wash. Yukkk.
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby L i am » Thu Jun 17, 2021 10:49 am

The last one is a vast improvement, and really good work Mike :thumb: :thumb:
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Re: Simple Bedroom

Postby Mike Amos » Fri Jun 18, 2021 12:17 am

Thanks mate, trying the dappled leaf's suggested by Fletch, it might make more difference when I learn how to do it better.

The idea is to have a png of leaves outside the window to give dappled light through the window, the version here is one 'pane' over the two windows. Not sure about it but there is something in this imho. Have to thank Fletch on the Twilight forum for that suggestion.
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