Courtyard garden.

Courtyard garden.

Postby Mike Amos » Fri Feb 22, 2019 11:52 pm

A sunken courtyard garden simple view showing the water reclamation unis in terraces. Twilight V2. Hdri lighting.
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby L i am » Sat Feb 23, 2019 10:55 am

Hi Mike, a suggestion, can you play with Depth of field to blurr the forground? Say centre of focus on the nearest part of the chair. Say an aperture of about as a guess 3.5?
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby Mike Amos » Sat Feb 23, 2019 12:25 pm

Next move for a render but I am being put off by the 10+ hours this one took.
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby tuna1957 » Sat Feb 23, 2019 5:56 pm

Like the start you have on this. Just wondering what is the material set up on the outside wall? Seems to have way to much reflection going on ? Good job none the less.
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby Mike Amos » Sun Feb 24, 2019 12:52 pm

Thanks, it's not a flat texture and there are reeds in the water reclamation 'terraces' which I think is creating a diffuse quality to the shadow on the wall.
I have rather nasty sinusitis at the moment so everything takes a bit longer to sink in, ?thinking? of a few physical changes to the model too. Lily pond perhaps.

Thanks for the pointers, always glad to get those.
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby L i am » Sun Feb 24, 2019 3:05 pm

Hi Mike I think the wall texture is just too big. I think if you reduce the size (a lot) It will be OK, by reducing the texture size say to 10 percent at least, of what it is now?
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby chedda » Sun Mar 03, 2019 9:55 am

It's a good start Mike i'd work on the details, the window would help with a reflection of your terracing.
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby chedda » Mon Mar 04, 2019 8:22 pm

I had a quick sketch, with your terraced courtyard idea.
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Re: Courtyard garden.

Postby Mike Amos » Wed Mar 06, 2019 8:14 am

Thanks Simon, I prefer yours, there is a problem with the model somewhere. I purge the model but it does not stop so I will have to start again. That's life.
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