Church sketch

Church sketch

Postby allanx » Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:19 am

Hi to everyone,

Here is a project I've done last week, 3D model and some renderings.....

Hope you all like it...

Thanks,

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Re: Church sketch

Postby mirjman » Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:20 am

really nice npr renders! I like the contrast of the sky with the white siding, and the glass is really convincing. What is the material on the left building in the last render? It looks like battens on top of white bricks. The only other comment I have is that the roof texture on the left in the second render is repeating enough to distract the eye.
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Re: Church sketch

Postby david57 » Sat Dec 22, 2007 4:39 am

Nice work.
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Re: Church sketch

Postby allanx » Sat Dec 22, 2007 7:09 am

Thanks, yes its wood battens on brick wall... yeah the roofs kinda annoying I'm still looking for a work around bringing a huge tilable images to replace it but it slows the model down...

Thanks again mirjman and david57 for the nice comments...

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Re: Church sketch

Postby sketchy » Sat Dec 22, 2007 8:12 am

Great presentation of the lines of the building. Pleasing overall as well. The composition of the second one with the grass is great, it provides interest but keeps the attention on the building.
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Re: Church sketch

Postby allanx » Sat Dec 22, 2007 8:44 am

Thanks sketchy for the very nice comment, yeah my client likes the second one too because of the grass thing in front...

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Re: Church sketch

Postby ScottPara » Sat Dec 22, 2007 6:49 pm

Allanx,

These are quite nice. My only comment would be that the trees really take away from what is a great presentation. They are almost to sketchy or unrealistic in my opinion. The building itself is great but really need some attention to the landscaping. Please continue to post.

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Re: Church sketch

Postby allanx » Sun Dec 23, 2007 4:11 am

Thanks scottpara for the nice suggestion, I have alot of images to post this coming year...I'll compile them and post them here..

Thanks again,

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Re: Church sketch

Postby Gaieus » Sun Dec 23, 2007 9:04 am

Actually I don't mind the sketchy trees - nor the silhouette people - they are obviously put there as illustration and to give a scale to the main thing - the building. Mixing styles to emphasize the main subject can be a nice way to present things.

But of course, tastes are different and all tha contributions here can result in an aven better final output.
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Re: Church sketch

Postby allanx » Mon Dec 24, 2007 2:13 am

Thanks Gaieus, I'm taking all criticisms possitibly to improve my style...

Happy Holidays,

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